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Utterly general and vague lines. Avoid starting introductory paragraph with such stereotypical ways that invoke but no admiration.Terrorism is an organized system of intimidation to obtain political demands as well as self-interested objectives. It is systematic use of terror or unpredictable violence against government to attain the political purpose
The form of terrorism you are underscoring in this sentence exists centuries earlier was used to reduce the victims to a state of submission.It has been used to suppress slaves, peasants and minorities .
Remember, this is not the kind of terrorism we are fighting with.
Perhaps, you intended to give the background of terrorism; however, neither the way nor the style is suitable and appealing.
Again a blunder! Think a little. When you say, 'Terrorism has been used to suppress slaves, peasants and minorities' you are actually referring to 'state-terrorism' that is not the case with your next sentence as the next sentence is about 'terrorism on the part of non-state actors'. You are not allowed to jump so comfortably from one form of terrorism to another. Whenever, you commit such a blunder, you will surely fall into the folly 'abrupt expression'- an expression that instills a strong aversion into its reader. Of course, you do not want your reader to be annoyed.It has been used to suppress slaves, peasants and minorities . Terrorists create sense of insecurity, fear and uncertainty among the masses to destabilize the foundation of the state
Rather you should write, 'Terrorism is not a modern phenomenon'. By regarding it as an activity you are limiting its meaning at the very first place.Terrorism is not modern activity
.In ancient Greece, the Dorian's occupied Sparta after defeating the local inhabitants, known as Helots, and forcing them to cultivate land so that the agricultural produce would benefit the conquerors. however with the passage of the time method and Tactics are adopted by terrorists have been changed and become more dangerous. Strategies of Terrorists are broadly categorized such as Bombings, Suicide attacks, Rocket and mortar attacks among them most horrible is target killing.
Now for a while concentrate on these lines.
Summarizing and analyzing these lines>>> , 'In ancient Greece,.......................would benefit the conquerors. However......more dangerous. Strategies of terrorists.........is target killing'.
Do these sentences make any sense. Of course not. There is no link and connection between these sentences. It feels as if you are jumping and bouncing erratically and unpredictably.
Also note that that bombing, suicide attacks, rocket and mortar attacks etc are not the terrorist strategies. Terrorists strategies are like intimidation, provocation etc.
Introduction is brief and comprehensive enough to accommodate so much sentences on an single exclusive argument that can, otherwise, be summed up one sentence.Terrorizing the civilian population can never be termed as jihad and can never be reconciled with the teachings of Islam. In Quran Allah said "If anyone slew an innocent person it would be as if he slew the whole mankind and if anyone saved a life it would be as if he saved the life of the whole mankind" [Al-Qur’an 5:32] Islamic law forbids aggressive warfare. The Quran chapter “The Cow,” 2:190, says, “Fight in the way of God against those who fight against you, but begin not hostilities. Lo! God loveth not aggressors.” Hazrat Abu Bakr al-Siddiq, the first Caliph, gave these instructions to his armies: “I instruct you in ten matters: Do not kill women, children, the old, or the infirm; do not cut down fruit-bearing trees; do not destroy any town . . . ” (Malik’s Muwatta’, “Kitab al-Jihad.”)
Not 'special' instead use specific. e.g specific group not special group. particular is also advisable.the act of terrorism is not restricted or limited to special nation , people or groups
>>> Always consult thesaurus while writing...
The entire world is now facing the monster of terrorism that has shaken the very foundations of the world.the entire world now facing the monster of terrorism which shaken the foundation of world
>>>Faith of irony????faith of irony
>>>>> ??????????? Don't sacrifice your expressionsome anti-Muslims people use the Muslims for their unfair means and purposes
>>>>>>>Irrelevant citation.....the Muslims waking up from deep slumber, they remember that they had their own glorious past so this self awareness become cause of many strong movement for the establishment of Islamic values again, that time nobody were not afraid to die because dying on Deen was big honour . USE realized power of Muslim as they can move the mountain or path of any river so they decided to use them . USE spend million on that mujaheddin ( present Taliban) and result was afghan war.
>>>>>Always be relevant
>>>>>There is utter lack of coherence
>>>>>use simple and direct words
>>>>>etc., etc., etc.......
Throughout my analysis, I didn't mean to discourage you. You deserve to be credited for inclining to tempt your hand for writing.
Continue on and never stop.