good but how have you numbered your points for example point 3 does not contain any meaning and only act as connecting phrase...
- intro
a bullet fired from gun cant be brought back.a dead man cant be given life..because past direct present and present direct future...because things flow though slow..but never stop because they dont wait as they are not made to do so...so as time and tide that wait for no man....- time and tide wait for no man why?
- because they are
- unstoppable
- unmatchable
- limitless
- hence unconquerable
[#]because
[1]they are directed
[2]managed- hence fixed
conclusion- time and tide design things but detereote tooo.
Last edited by Zealot; 22nd May 2016 at 09:44 PM.
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good but how have you numbered your points for example point 3 does not contain any meaning and only act as connecting phrase...
Hi bro its a mistake ...i hadnot made it deliberately..i know it is trite mistake
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1: Introduction
Time signify opportunity while tide represent an unforeseen danger. Therefore, statement covey the idea that one should grasp his opportunities and prepare for the worst because they are unpredictable.
2. Grasping the opportunity
2a. Individual level (A student should learn maximum from teachers)
2b. National level (Pakistan should grasp the opportunity of CPEC)
3. Preparing for the worst
3a. Individual level (Person should set aside some saving for worse times)
3b. National level (Pakistan should prepare for disaster management)
4. Conclusion
Bro delete this post
Last edited by Zealot; 24th May 2016 at 08:49 PM.
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She is an active member of cssforum.if she would come here.i m sure everyone will get benefit of her knowledge along with this forum.so bro if you can make a thread on cssforun to bring her here.i shall be very thankful to you.i will not join cssforum again...but if you could not do so it ok then bro☺
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I don't think its appropriate to ask in such a manner. But certainly, she should come here